Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-26580819-20150717231549

Yeah, I remember something about pizza and stuff. Pizza might have been all the turtle's favorite food, I can't remember. I laughed when Kanami called him Froggy-nardo.

Which reminds me that it amuses me when Tohya calls Rudy, Rudy-nii since it sounds like Rudini, like he's Houdini or something.

Oh I have a lot of problems. I should have taken the grammar class in university instead of avoiding it because I thought it would be boring. I had issues with comma-splicing in college so I think I go out of my way to avoid commas now. I mainly described the clothes since it was out of character for them to wear dresses. If they were wearing their usual clothing it wouldn't have been mentioned. Thanks. I had a hard time trying to describe the clothes so that it makes sense, never mind keeping it in a way Nao would think it.

Thanks. I think they might be a little more in-character there than in the most recent thing I'm working on. I think when I finish this I might go back and rework a lot of it... or just leave it and write something new. I'm not sure if the two are friends but they're trying. Akatsuki has friends outside the guild after the Akiba raid but not really in the guild (unless you count Shiroe who she seems to almost stalk in the anime and Nao who she trades insults with). Tet just seems to stick to Nao most of the time. In the Truth & Dare story (that's really, really long), Tet is shopping for nailpolish and Akatsuki pops up and comments on the colors then buys one. They end up shopping together after that.

Oh yeah, Nao also commented that the dress was cute rather than sexy since during the Truth & Dare she was wearing something a little more sexy and he happened to walk in on her wearing lingerie at one point (though as both he and Akatsuki said, "why are you wearing that outside?" since she was on the roof in the middle of the night since she couldn't sleep and didn't expect anyone to be up.) Sometimes I have odd ideas...