Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-918376-20150718034815

Pfft, I never finish stories. I probably have like, one or two one-shots that are complete. One of them was actually going to have a continuation, but then I ended it after the first chapter because I didn't feel like continuing.

Yeah, typos happen a lot. I get obsessive over them, so that's when you see me making all of those edits. Yeah, I can see her comments. Nowhere near as many as mine, that's for sure. I'm pretty sure I made so many comments on Milkshake, they don't all fit on the screen at once.

Mari seemed rather OOC in part 3 of T&D, but it's most likely because of the alcohol. I would think that Henrietta would've stopped Mari before she drank too much alcohol, or the second Mari started getting out of hand. However, I liked the conclusion to it. I'd definitely be Akatsuki in that situation (or Nyanta/Shiroe). Also, I'm guessing you're leaving the Tet pajama thing ambiguous (whether she was actually too drunk to switch clothes, or if she was using Nao), but I've known people who had to take care of people that were way too drunk, so I interpreted it as the former. And in that case, again, it's realistic.

(That said, nobody tried force-feeding Mari or Tet panaceas, which would've cured drunkenness, probably. It can deal with hangovers so it can probably get rid of the effects of drunkenness.)