Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-26580819-20150717223724

I guess so, but he's Froggy-nardo not a TMNT! lol.

True. She is pretty powerful.

Okay. I'm sure it's needed. I sometimes have issues. As for the starting with She / I  (I glanced at the doc) sometimes I really have no clue of how else to phrase it. It annoys me that most paragraphs start the same way. I do have a bad tendancy to write the wrong word or make errors and not notice them when I re-read stuff. I just figured this story was short so that's why I chose that one. Sorry if it's bad.

I figured out that it was Kawatarou Nakai by process of elimination.