Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-26580819-20150804030406

Okay, I hope it's a bit better now. If you want the links to the original parts, just let me know. I fixed a few typos and stuff I noticed too. I didn't reread the whole thing, just skimmed it and fixed what I noticed. Hopefully it's a bit better now.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gdIqK9_8iGuPJBVnObf3y-FrGa2ISvtBeBabxRM78bQ/edit?usp=sharing

I added about cutting hair to the death one, if you want to check that part. I put it as a comment so it should be easy to find. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IWixzumZfPpKpY5oarL7_bn1MiRKGDcfXrssGVYE2iw/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks :)