Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-26580819-20150803034030

Ah, that makes sense. Nyanta would do something like that to try and decrease the conflict (as opposed to the anime that had Tet trying to spur on the rivalry).

I guess they had a time limit on what they could do. A few thoughts might have been useful instead of emphasizing the silence. I think there was a couple of difference on the moon, but it left out a lot of stuff. I'll get around to reading all of the LNs at some point. I'm about halfway through Vol. 2 in English (I've been reading it slowly).

True. I still worry that my stories are bad, right up there with the bad ones on FF.net. I also feel like some of the typos make me look stupid, like using "then" when it's supposed to be "than".

After fixing up the death one and adding in a paragraph about haircutting, I went back and looked at the Truth & Dare story. I wasn't sure how I'd fix it but after reading over the beginning of the game, Tet gets asked (by Nao) how many people has she kissed and who are they. She's forced to say she kissed a girl, which, in the context of the original version, wasn't a big deal. If everyone else doesn't know she was a boy, then it's a bigger deal and it would leave at least some of them wondering about it. It could lead Tohya (or someone) to ask something that will out her to everyone.

I worked a bit on the Kunie Gold summary, trying to leave most of what was already there, there. I feel bad erasing what other people have done (even though the stuff that's listed in the first sentence actually happened in the previous episode). I'll try to finish up that episode tomorrow. I'll probably be heading to bed now. I'm sorry that the summaries are a little long but I write it as I watch it and I'm bad at making a long story short (my mom says I make a short story long). I put in quite a few pics too. There's a couple of spots I would have put in those slide-show ones that switch between pictures, but I don't know how. I also don't know how to delete a picture. I messed up one of the pictures on Retry but playing around with the settings and couldn't put it back to what it was (took off wrap text) or delete the pic and start over. It's at the very end so it's not a big deal but it just bugged me that I couldn't figure it out.