Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-918376-20150821003613

Nah, most of it are just commas. The writing itself is fine, it's usually more writing nuances like reading flow and sentence structure that I take issue with. I'm in the middle of tearing apart my LHxFE8 script, so that'll become a wall of comments soon, too.

(My internet is being terrible so I'll respond later so I don't type up a huge thing, only to lose it when I try posting it.)