Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-26580819-20150716180646

I know I suck at critiquing. I usually try to find the good stuff in what I read. I had saying negative stuff. This was on a writing thread on the site Gaiaonline. The person pretty much ordered me to post what I had written for a challenge even though I warned them I hadn't even proofread it yet. Someone else told me off for posting something that wasn't proofread. *sigh* I don't go to that thread anymore. The last time I popped in there to say hi everyone ignored me and I didn't need anything else bringing me down so I just haven't went back. I've never posted anything on FF.net.

Eeep...remind me not to let you read anything I write then if it'll be hard to follow and goes out of character. I usually write in 3rd person limited but for some reason I just felt like writing Tet in 1st person; it seemed to make more sense at the time.

He just realised that he had met Tet before... Tet had been cross-dressed (long story there) and he hadn't realised she was a he and thought she was cute so now he's like "I thought a guy was cute? What's wrong with me?" He had too many parallels between Tet and Aki (which was the name I gave Tet) that he pretty much was like "That was you, wasn't it?" and totally confused her since she had no clue what he was talking about. It's complicated... I think my whole story is too complicated. He had met Tet a couple of times so had more to go on than when he ran into Marie & Henrietta (though Henrietta did call her Marie)...he also had a girlfriend when he ran into them, though he thought they were both pretty (his girlfriend wasn't too happy about that). I'm not liking that girlfriend part though so I want to change it, but I want to actually finish something and not spend all my time going back and changing little things.

Ah, interesting. Did that note have something to do with that?