Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-26580819-20150817223128

Okay. I will read more of it. If there's any parts you've changed that you want feedback on, just let me know.

It's interesting how Marie is the only one that's noted to have a different accent (specifically kansai dialect). Does that mean no one else met is from Osaka? Or do they all just speak proper Japanese? I don't really know the difference between the dialects and stuff. I notice Yen Press has her using a lot of contractions and such.

Then there's also her behaviour... She throws herself on Nao at first (asking him if he wants to touch her breast and stuff...which doesn't seem too different from Tet's "do you want to see my panties")... later she seems nervous and shy. I'm not sure about in the web novel, but in the anime she's rarely around Nao in the 2nd season (partly because he's away for over a month then they go to the kid's arc). Other than her playing tug-of-war with Tet, using Nao as the rope in the middle, and a brief little cute moment in ep. 24... there's not much. I don't know how they are together...

Anyway, I'm pretty sure they'll end up together at the end... but I'll still have fun with Tetsugu until that happens for sure.