Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-918376-20150724145703

A bit more than that. It's in Chapter 14A.

Well, the thing about the script is that it's normally written out in a code designed for the game. But it's not very good for reviewing the script itself, so in order to read the script normally, I have to manually get rid of the code parts of it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cq6bHAvmYRMNaZtj2OaACsA1ywYswkIDUQTkrq3asoE/edit?usp=sharing

Here's what I have of the script. I've finished formatting it up to chapter 2, and I also have 14A done (because it was at the end). There's four sections involving Tet(ra) on Ray's route: one in chapter 5 (which isn't on there yet), one in chapter 10 (also not on the doc), one in chapter 13 (hasn't been edited yet since I possibly will be removing it entirely in favor of another scene with Queen Nazuna), and her talk with Ray in chapter 13.

Tet's talk with Ray is done, if you want to look at that and give it your input. I wasn't really sure how to depict Tet in this scene. On one hand, she tends to be light-hearted. On the other hand, as the (optional) support conversations will reveal, Kazuhiko is the one who basically saved her life and took her in off the streets, and she views him in LHxFE8 as basically a mentor figure, but he's now been brutally murdered. I'm not sure how she'd act in the light of that.