Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-918376-20150719214438

What you added was fine, and I fixed the formatting on the page. It's all good.

As for Nao's backstory, I think it makes sense. You can use whatever parts of my version that you wish. My Mari bias shows XD although I think it makes sense for her to be talking more (I didn't get into their thoughts that much, just their general verbal interaction), since as I said, she's the one who tries taking responsibility for her own problems first. Tet and Nao probably are more conflicted than she is, since Mari's pretty much just "I like Nao, and I want to get into a relationship with him, but he needs to make up his mind."