Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-918376-20150821045700

I know how you feel. I do the same exact thing, as you can tell with LHxFE8. And then I go back and change it up all over again XD

You said that first-person POV wasn't your strong suit/not what you're used to, right? I think that might be what's bogging you down at times, since you have to kinda get into the characters' heads and write things from that perspective. With Milkshake, you were fine, but in a longer composition like Truth or Dare, Tet and Nao's voices start merging together when, in my opinion, they should still remain distinct. Probably the fact that you're writing for Tet (a literal mystery) and Nao (not really well-developed even after what, 10 volumes) doesn't help. (Sorry if that sounds kinda harsh. I just thought of this after thinking about my struggles with writing Ray for LHxFE8).

Hope the writing went well.