Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-26580819-20150718051635

Ah. I have some longer than others. My main problem is I usually have other ideas rattling around in my head and then I find one that just seems more interesting and start that with plans to continue the previous story eventually, but I never get back to it.

I sucks at commas. Sorry about that.

Yeah, she tends to zone out while cuddling Akatsuki. If something really, really is out of character or you think of something that would make more sense for her to say, you can let me know, please.

I'm not liking the continuation part mostly because it connect directly to my Tet's past story which I was iffy about. Most of it is Nao realising he's met Tet in the past and had a crush on her, which makes it even harder to ignore that he kind of likes her. In the meantime Tet pretty much decides that she doesn't deserve him and Marie does and says that... pretty much he doesn't want Tet to stop flirting. Marie gets really clingy "I need you now since I'm upset I can't have my festival. Nyanta & Akatsuki can finish training the kids." Though at that time he had dragged Tet away from the kids' battle to talk to her in private. He doesn't leave until training is done then everyoen goes over to CMA. Then Marie finds out that Nao still really likes Tet and hits him and calls him a jerk in front of everyone. In the end they go into her office where they talk a bit then Tet pretty much says she doesn't want to be the 'other woman' and hurt Marie & that Nao needs a real woman not a facsimile. She leaves and Marie worries about her because it seems out of character... and that's where it is now. I'm really not liking it but I'm not sure what to do with it.

Oh yeah, it started with the girls hungover and Nao left a glass of water in Tet's room. He then went over to Marie's with cookies he bought along the way. He goes home and eats (I think). Someone mentions flowers would probably be better than cookies but it had been raining and nothing was open yet except the bakery. After breakfast he goes and buys a sunflower bouquet for Marie and leaves it on her desk for her. He then heads back and gets a bouquet of mixed flowers for Tet and some desserts for everyone in the guild. He was hoping flowers and sweets would make the girls feel better.

The kids rooms are a few floors down. They might be sound asleep or awake. I never thought about it. I just figured they're a few floors down so probably don't hear too much. If they woke up they might hear voices but unless they were really loud they might not hear exactly what was said. Or they woke up and just decided it was best to stay away and try to get back to sleep. It might be something to look into if I rewrite it.