Thread:Ashleyien/@comment-918376-20150707020140/@comment-26580819-20150724030737

Yeah, I think she did... I think Akatsuki said he was strange or weird or something and Tet agreed saying she couldn't argue that he could be strange sometimes.

The boss is just sort of odd and random. "You're cute, do you want a job?" then explains he needs someone to wash dishes since the guy just quit. Tet wonders what in the world being cute has to do with washing dishes. I think at some point the whole thing will need some work but I think it's over 100 pages. There's one section that has two versions because I didn't know which one I liked better. Pretty much I wrote one and then was like "wait, Aki was supposed to be home alone!"... and rewrote it but I don't know which works better. It's the ending part but probably the whole 100+ pages would have to be read to know which might work better. There's another section I wrote later that I ahve to figure out where it fits in.

I just feel bad asking people to read something so long, especially when I'm concerned that it's really bad and really out of character.

And it had better not take you forever! Forever is a long time!